The Rhetoric of Fiction

The Rhetoric of Fiction

The_Godfather_Screenplay

To what extent can fiction–meaning that to include all forms of storytelling–purge itself of all rhetoric?

By rhetoric I mean techniques and devices by which the author attempts to persuade us to think and feel about the story in a particular way. The question is, is it possible for an author to eschew all rhetoric and simply and purely lay his subject before his audience and allow the very nature of that subject to wield its effect?

Wayne Booth, in The Rhetoric of Fiction, thinks not. He asks us to consider the following murders:

“Macbeth murders Duncan, and we pity Macbeth rather than Duncan; Markheim murders the pawnbroker, and we hope for Markheim’s salvation; Monsieur Verdoux murders a series of wealthy women, and we side with him against a rotten civilization; the would-be heir in Kind Hearts and Coronets murders a half-dozen or so of his relatives and we simply laugh; Zuleika Dobson “murders” the whole of the undergraduate body at Oxford and we laugh, quite complicatedly; Ch’en, in Man’s Fate, murders a stranger in cold blood and we are terrified–for Ch’en. There is no need to list the many murders in which the more “natural” responses of hatred toward the murderer and pity for the victim are made to predominate” (p. 113, notes 26).

Booth wants us to see that even so universally condemned an action as murder cannot be depended upon to manifest its natural evil without the help of rhetoric–and that rhetoric can also be deployed in such a way so as to make us (at least momentarily) blind to the evil of the murder and in some sense “root” for the murderer. As I’m sure many people do when they watch the Godfather films.

But if Booth is right, then how is it possible for us to distinguish when a story is telling us the truth about its subject and when it is simply masking its subject with rhetoric?

What do you think?

 

* The image above, reproduced courtesy of Eippol at Wikimedia Commons, is of the original screenplay of The Godfather II in the National Museum of the Cinema in Turin, Italy.

 

Take the Downton Abbey Quiz

 WHICH DOWNTON ABBEY CHARACTER ARE YOU?

Take the new Downton Abbey Quiz and find out whether you’re upstairs or downstairs!

At the end of a long, tiring day, you prefer to

A. Retire to your room to talk over your love life with your maid while applying generous amounts of hand cream

B. Call for Branson to bring round the car while looking forward to getting into your nightgown and reading Trollope in bed

C. Enjoy a last, meditative snifter alone

D. Concoct further spoils and stratagems with your partner in crime

E. Make sure everything is ready for breakfast in the morning

If you found yourself unexpectedly all alone in the Abbey you would

A. Take the opportunity to clean the second-best silver

B. Short-sheet all the beds in the family bedrooms

C. Poke around the little drawers in Lord Grantham’s writing desk

D. Go around and visit some of the poorer tenants before coming home to rearrange your snuff boxes

E. Stare out a window and think how boring your life is

Your secret life’s wish is

A. To see your biggest rival tried, sentenced, and hung by the neck until dead

B. To be named a marquis

C. Indoor refrigeration

D. To have your spouse discovered to have been only “mostly” dead

E. To return by time-machine to the sanity of the Victorian Era

Your favorite play, film, or television serial is

A. Upstairs, Downstairs

B. Macbeth

C. Pride and Prejudice

D. Miss Marple

E. Debrett’s Peerage (does that count?)

Your idea of the perfect day is

A. Scoring at least five verbal zingers before dusk

B. The satisfaction of having served your employer to the utmost of your capabilities

C. Finding out that the man (woman) that your sister (brother) is in love with is really in love with you

D. Taking it out on someone for no reason whatsoever

E. A hunt or shoot, followed by tea outdoors, followed by a nap, followed by a fine dinner, bed

*          *          *

So, which Downton Abbey character are you?

Actually, it doesn’t matter. What’s interesting is the fact that we like to take these kinds of quizzes in the first place. Why do we like to do so? Why do we like to identify with fictional characters, imagining ourselves living their lives? 

Why, in other words, do comic book and fantasy fans go to the annual ComicCon convention in San Diego dressed as their favorite characters from Lord of the Rings or Marvel?

Why, indeed, do children play dress-up and other games in which they lose themselves in fictional worlds?

What is the point of all this play?

This is one of the questions I am considering in my new book, The Happiness Plot, otherwise titled, The Odd Predicament of Being a Teller of Tales in an Age Which Has Lost Its Story, coming soon.

Meanwhile, I’d love to hear your thoughts on the question I raise. 

 

The image above reproduced courtesy of PBS Masterpiece.

 

On Moralizing and Morality in Fiction

“The artist whose chief goal is not to make everything more beautiful but to enlist his audience in a cause—no matter what that cause may be—is rarely if ever prepared to tell the whole truth and nothing but. He replaces the true complexity of the world with the false simplicity of the ideologue. He alters reality not to make everything more beautiful, but to stack the deck.”

–Terry Teachout, remarks upon accepting his recent Bradley Prize

We’ve all encountered works of art that suffer because the artist’s missionary zeal for whatever cause got in the way of his or her submission to the demands of the beautiful. But as I argued yesterday, dedication to the beautiful does not rule out the effort to persuade. (For more on this, see my “On Fiction and Philosophy.”) Art in all media, and stories in particular, strives to prove to an audience a certain truth. So how does the artist avoid moralizing?

Teachout continues: “In writing about art, I try never to moralize, nor do I look with favor upon artists who do. But I seek to be ever and always alive to the moral force of art whose creators aspire merely to make everything more beautiful, and in so doing to pierce the veil of the visible and give us a glimpse of the transcendently true.”

So there’s a distinction, Teachout suggests, between moralizing and the moral force of art, a force that infuses the beautiful elements of a successful work of art and gives us a glimpse into the transcendent. So how does an artist articulate this moral force without moralizing?

In his book Story, screenwriting guru Robert McKee has some interesting things to say about didacticism (or moralizing). When the premise of a story, he says, “is an idea you feel you must prove to the world, and you design your story as an undeniable certification of that idea, you set yourself on the road to didacticism. In your zeal to persuade, you will stifle the voice of the other side. Misusing and abusing art to preach, your screenplay will become a thesis film, a thinly disguised sermon as you strive in a single stroke to convert the world. Didacticism results from the naive enthusiasm that fiction can be used like a scalpel to cut out the cancers of society.”

One way for the writer to avoiding moralizing, therefore, is to create a story in which two or more points of view conflict–what philosophers call a dialectical engagement. About this McKee goes on: “As a story develops, you must willingly entertain opposite, even repugnant ideas. The finest writers have dialectical, flexible minds that easily shift points of view. They see the positive, the negative, and all shades of irony, seeking the truth of these views honestly and convincingly.”

This doesn’t mean that one point of view won’t “win out” in the story’s climax. But it does mean that this moral truth, if it is one, will only manifest itself and reveal its force through a spirited combat with points of view that oppose it, but which also seem to have some truth to them. This is the case, at least, in the most humanly complex kinds of story.

On Fiction and Philosophy

Do stories tell us truths about life? Is there any relation between fiction and philosophy?

C.S. Lewis, in An Experiment in Criticism, appears to say “no.” In speaking about the differences between tragedy, comedy, and farce he writes: “None of the three kinds [of drama] is making a statement about life in general. They are all constructions: things made out of the stuff of real life; additions to life rather than comments on it.”

Lewis qualifies his point. Any story “will be impregnated with all the wisdom, knowledge, and experience the author has; and even more by something which I can only vaguely describe as the flavor or “feel” that actual life has for him.” However, to regard the story “as primarily a vehicle for that philosophy” is for Lewis an “outrage” to the thing the author has made for us.

What Lewis is keen on stressing here, rightly, is that stories, novels, plays–narrative art in general–should not be taken as mere vehicles for the dissemination of an author’s philosophy. A play, for example, is not just a delivery system for abstract comments about life, more diverting than reading Kant’s Critique of Pure Reason to be sure, but essentially no different from Kant in being a philosophical proclamation. No story can simply be reduced to a statement of whatever wisdom the author may possess. “Don’t be indecisive” (I jest) is not a substitute for Hamlet. A play, in other words, is not a philosophical statement plus some literary qualities that we may dispense with if we choose.

And yet, Lewis fails to do justice to the way in which stories do tell us truths. I like Robert McKee’s formulation: “Storytelling is the creative demonstration of truth. A story is the living proof of an idea, the conversion of idea to action.” A story is not a work of philosophy, but there is at least a perceived wisdom embodied in the decisions the author has his characters make. The “argument” of the story is its plot, which in its climax aspires to conclude something about the way life ought to be lived. But this truth, if it is one, will only be convincing to an audience who attends to the literary qualities of the piece.

So a story is not a mere vehicle for a philosophy, but a philosophy is embedded in every story like the seal of a signet ring is embedded in wax.