On Moralizing and Morality in Fiction

“The artist whose chief goal is not to make everything more beautiful but to enlist his audience in a cause—no matter what that cause may be—is rarely if ever prepared to tell the whole truth and nothing but. He replaces the true complexity of the world with the false simplicity of the ideologue. He alters reality not to make everything more beautiful, but to stack the deck.”

–Terry Teachout, remarks upon accepting his recent Bradley Prize

We’ve all encountered works of art that suffer because the artist’s missionary zeal for whatever cause got in the way of his or her submission to the demands of the beautiful. But as I argued yesterday, dedication to the beautiful does not rule out the effort to persuade. (For more on this, see my “On Fiction and Philosophy.”) Art in all media, and stories in particular, strives to prove to an audience a certain truth. So how does the artist avoid moralizing?

Teachout continues: “In writing about art, I try never to moralize, nor do I look with favor upon artists who do. But I seek to be ever and always alive to the moral force of art whose creators aspire merely to make everything more beautiful, and in so doing to pierce the veil of the visible and give us a glimpse of the transcendently true.”

So there’s a distinction, Teachout suggests, between moralizing and the moral force of art, a force that infuses the beautiful elements of a successful work of art and gives us a glimpse into the transcendent. So how does an artist articulate this moral force without moralizing?

In his book Story, screenwriting guru Robert McKee has some interesting things to say about didacticism (or moralizing). When the premise of a story, he says, “is an idea you feel you must prove to the world, and you design your story as an undeniable certification of that idea, you set yourself on the road to didacticism. In your zeal to persuade, you will stifle the voice of the other side. Misusing and abusing art to preach, your screenplay will become a thesis film, a thinly disguised sermon as you strive in a single stroke to convert the world. Didacticism results from the naive enthusiasm that fiction can be used like a scalpel to cut out the cancers of society.”

One way for the writer to avoiding moralizing, therefore, is to create a story in which two or more points of view conflict–what philosophers call a dialectical engagement. About this McKee goes on: “As a story develops, you must willingly entertain opposite, even repugnant ideas. The finest writers have dialectical, flexible minds that easily shift points of view. They see the positive, the negative, and all shades of irony, seeking the truth of these views honestly and convincingly.”

This doesn’t mean that one point of view won’t “win out” in the story’s climax. But it does mean that this moral truth, if it is one, will only manifest itself and reveal its force through a spirited combat with points of view that oppose it, but which also seem to have some truth to them. This is the case, at least, in the most humanly complex kinds of story.

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  1. Sorry it has taken so long to get back to this. Maybe you won’t even read this old thread. How do you see Gardner’s work fitting in with your own approach? E.g., a quote from _On Moral Fiction_:

    “Didacticism and true art are inmiscible; and in any case nothing guarantees that didacticism will be moral. … True art is moral. We recognize true art by its’ careful, thoroughly honest search for an analysis of values. It is not didactic because, instead of teaching by authority and force, it explores, open-mindedly, to learn what it should teach. It clarifies like an experiment in a chemistry lab, and confirms. As a chemist’s experiment tests the laws of nature and dramatically reveals the truth or falsity of scientific hypotheses, moral art tests values and rouses trustworthy feelings about the better and the worse in human action.”

  2. Didacticism is a big problem in fiction for children and young adults as well. But, of course, you know that.

    I read your piece “The Fault in Our Stories” at The Catholic Thing. Excellent article and much needed. We need to be telling our children (and ourselves!) better stories.

    I look forward to reading more of your posts. Keep up the good work! God bless.

    • Daniel McInerny says:

      Thanks for the encouraging word, Rob. I’m glad you’ve found the blog and I hope you’ll return often. I look forward to checking out your own blog.

  3. You of course, are probably well aware of John Gardner’s _On Moral Fiction_. It’s probably the most famous writing on morals and fiction in the past 30 years. Why didn’t you mention it? Seems a strange omission, even if you might disagree with its content …

    • It was not an intentional omission: I have Gardner’s book right here on my shelf. It’s just that as I was writing the post McKee’s remarks on didacticism leapt to mind. Thanks for the suggestion that I return to Gardner’s book. Any particular thoughts from him that you think I should bring into this discussion?

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